Write a 10–12 sentence persuasive comment in English for a school online forum advocating weekly digital-free…

Questão

Write a 10–12 sentence persuasive comment in English for a school online forum advocating weekly digital-free study hours. Include a clear position, one counterargument and its rebuttal, and at least one hashtag. Consider the mixed audience of students and teachers.

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Resposta esperada

I believe our school should adopt weekly digital-free study hours to improve focus and deepen learning. Many students report constant distractions from phones and apps during study time. A scheduled hour without devices would encourage sustained concentration and better retention. Teachers could use that period for quiet review or guided practice. Some argue that digital tools are essential for research and collaboration. However, the policy would be limited to a short, regular slot and would not ban all technology. During that hour, students could practice note-taking, discuss topics face-to-face, and build study habits. The measure also supports mental well-being by reducing screen fatigue. I propose a pilot trial for one month to collect feedback from students and staff. If results show benefit, the program can be refined and expanded. Join the effort by sharing your views and signing the petition #FocusHour.

Explicação

A resposta apresenta uma posição clara e fundamentada sobre a importância de horas de estudo sem dispositivos digitais, destacando benefícios como maior concentração e retenção de informações. Inclui um contraargumento relevante e uma refutação que demonstra a viabilidade da proposta. Além disso, a sugestão de um teste piloto e o uso de uma hashtag incentivam a participação da comunidade escolar.

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