Rewrite the short paragraph replacing vague connectors (e.g., 'and', 'but') with more precise linking words to…

Questão

Rewrite the short paragraph replacing vague connectors (e.g., 'and', 'but') with more precise linking words to improve cohesion. Then justify your choices.

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Resposta esperada

Revised paragraph: 'Although she was exhausted from intense training, she persevered; consequently, her performance improved.' Justification: 'Although' marks concession and replaces vague 'but'; 'consequently' specifies a result relation replacing a simple 'and' to clarify causality.

Explicação

A revisão do parágrafo melhora a clareza ao utilizar conectores que indicam relações específicas entre as ideias. O uso de "although" enfatiza a contradição entre estar exausta e perseverar, enquanto "consequently" estabelece claramente a relação de causa e efeito entre a perseverança e a melhoria no desempenho. Essa precisão na escolha dos conectores contribui para uma maior coesão e fluidez do texto.

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